peer review

What I learned from this peer review is that my paper is alot better now that I edited it. The intro is solid and most of my expamples are clear except for one. All I have to do is add to my first paragraph how pokemon taught me any specific lessons. Also in my conclusion I am going to put in a few examples of how specifically the programs shaped me as an individual just to wrap it up and connect everything. I am happy with how the peer review went and It helped reinforce that I edited my paper correctly the first time. I am not going to change any of the television shows I used in my essay but I will add more exaples to a few of them. I am pleased with how my essay is organized because each show goes in chronilogial order as I grew up.