Intros and conclusions

The strategies I am using to draw people into my paper are stating a paraphrase of a commonly held view. I start by saying how Digital Media has influenced a large portion of people and everyone has their own experiences with it. Then I dive into how digital media has influenced me personally and how it made me more educated and well rounded.  In my conclusion I wrap up my paper by summarizing my main point and listing a final explanation about how media changed me. I wrote how media taught me to be a friendly, tough, powerful, outgoing, ambitious woman. Also how media prompted me to take the next step in my life by bettering myself with an eduaction at college. The question of "so what?" is answered because now the reader can conclude why I act certain ways now and the reader can better understand my personality. This essay provides a lot of personal insight into my true character and emotions.