peer review for paper 3

Today for my peer review I had Sam review and critique my paper. My paper is an anti-ad for the ford auto industry. Ive taken an image of a Ford F150 truck and added text to expose Ford for their auto bailout and the burdon it has put on us taxpayers. The point is that their bailout is costing us money and most people dont even realize it. My spoof ad reads "It's Simple. You buy our cars. Or you'll pay for them anyways." In my paper I have spent time analyzing my add, talking about my spoof ad and exposing the industry as a whole. According to my peer review partener my paper is straight forward and to the point. All I have to do is ad intext citations to support the claims and facts I have presented. I have two outside sources for my paper so now I realize I must cite them intext and include them at the end as well. Also For the last 2 pages of my paper I am going to focus on writing more about my spoof ad and why I made the choices I did in spoofing it from the original. My favorite and most helpfull peer review technique has been the drafting and talking with my peers about my paper. I cant stress enough how much I LOVE the idea of making multiple drafts becuase it really breaks up the assignment and makes it so much easier for me to write. Also talking with my peers really give me great insight and ideas for my paper.