analysis of second essay

My second essay is an analysis of Seventeen magazine and how the images relate to the text provided. I wrote about the fashion, beauty, accessory and health section of the magazine so far. I have chosen specific pages that are interesting to me and analyzed them to discover different advertising techniques and ideas. So far my paper is at a good length but to get it to the required length I can either extend my paragraphs with more analysis or add new paragraphs. I will most likely add one more paragraph and then go back and analyze my begining paragraphs. I recieved feedback on how I should go into more depth with the body types in the magazine. Also I need to add more arguement about the main point of the magazine. I will add an overall theme of the magazine and analyze that as well. I will answer the question of so what? and tie the essay all in together.